I think this needs a 3rd chapter. One where say Mark finds Jenny still in the doll suit 3 or 4 weeks later. Confronts Beth as to why she is still in. Some way Jenny lets him know she is now unwillingly trapped in it by Beth. Mark traps Beth in one but with a different face and tells them both that he owns the club and Beth's partners were actually working for him. The first chapter should have given the measurements of Jenny before and after putting the suit on. Maybe she was a 34C-28-36 and now she's 40G-22-46. And the nipples on the suit had some way to attach to her breast so she could get a little stimulation from them being twisted and pulled. Don't get me wrong love the story's all of them. Hope to see more.